Quick write.
By Nikayla 26/8/2020
One normal day there were two kids Milly and Tilly that got sent on a ride to the market by their mum/Tiffany to get some sausage rolls for dinner. Milly was biking and Tilly was walking the dog called Milo.
When Milly and Tilly got to the markets there was a person selling a fart gun but the weird thing was there was only one for sale. When Milly and Tilly came back out of the shop the person was not there.
On the way home they saw him. He had some lost aliens or that is what he said. Then just when they were almost home there was an alien car that came and picked the aliens up.
Bye bye the kids said.
They got home and had dinner. When they were watching they were watching the new there was a explosion but there dad was home so he was safe so he had apple crumb . Then Milly and Tilly had to get ready for bed, then they went to sleep.
Kia Ora Nikayla
ReplyDeleteMy name is Bessie, I'm in M1 at Grey Main School. I really like your quick write the names are great. Maybe next time you could check it makes sense but other wise I think it was a great piece of writing. Keep up the great work:)